The gunshots scared me! The picture is very beautiful, I think all the colors (including text) are very good. They seem to be very suitable and integrated.
Overall, this was a very chilling experience and engaging experience! The visuals are very enjoyable and help to keep the player engaged in the game following the story. It's nice to see you playing with the background to push the narrative and you change the background to fit the emotion of the story when you need to. The story is very intense, and the endings are quite chilling, and although they are vague, I believe the endings are great at provoking curiosity in the player. Good job!
I really love the illustrations you made for this! They give us a nice sense of the space the characters are in, which helps to immerse the player. :) I especially love how you made an illustration the background! It's very nice.
Though, I'm not quite sure I understood the story. I didn't notice anything really suspicious about the person in the car, so I was confused as to why I had to call the police.
The yellow text makes it hard to read in some places, and I'm not sure I grasp the story, but mechanically this is great and I love how you have the background as an illustration!!
This game is so immersive! So many different possible endings which is very interesting and it made me want to keep playing again and again! It was clear to understand what was going on and I loved the presentation of the game with the art and the occasional sound effects, it all tied together really well. Great job!
I really enjoy how the illustrations in this game compliment the story! The cold tones of the trees and snow really enhance the feeling of isolation! I think that if you decided to put sound in this game later on, it would make it even more immersive and frightening.
I agree with them that sound would be so cool here and add even more tension. I also love the contrast you have with the warm tones in the character and the cool, dull tones everywhere else. It really makes the character stand out. I'm also gonna borrow from what they said as a comment on my game and say maybe add a "play again" option at the end of each ending so that going back and trying to get the different endings is easier.
This is super intense and really sets a mood throughout each path! Going forward, I think it will be interesting to see where you take the illustrations and possibly sound effects (if you decide to use them). Each path felt different and genuine and I can't wait to see where this goes! Keep up the good work!
Wow this is intense. I don't know if this is the setting you want to keep using in a more finished version, but I think it is a good illustration of what street harassment feels like (If I can presume that much). Having us answer honestly or not, assume to worst on the antagonist or not... those are bold moral stakes. Good job
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The gunshots scared me!
The picture is very beautiful, I think all the colors (including text) are very good. They seem to be very suitable and integrated.
Overall, this was a very chilling experience and engaging experience! The visuals are very enjoyable and help to keep the player engaged in the game following the story. It's nice to see you playing with the background to push the narrative and you change the background to fit the emotion of the story when you need to. The story is very intense, and the endings are quite chilling, and although they are vague, I believe the endings are great at provoking curiosity in the player. Good job!
I really love the illustrations you made for this! They give us a nice sense of the space the characters are in, which helps to immerse the player. :) I especially love how you made an illustration the background! It's very nice.
Though, I'm not quite sure I understood the story. I didn't notice anything really suspicious about the person in the car, so I was confused as to why I had to call the police.
The yellow text makes it hard to read in some places, and I'm not sure I grasp the story, but mechanically this is great and I love how you have the background as an illustration!!
am i dumb because it's really cool so far but i don't understand the ending
The art is good for setting the stage, but the complexity coupled with the yellow text can make a couple of parts kind of hard to read.
This game is so immersive! So many different possible endings which is very interesting and it made me want to keep playing again and again! It was clear to understand what was going on and I loved the presentation of the game with the art and the occasional sound effects, it all tied together really well. Great job!
I really enjoy how the illustrations in this game compliment the story! The cold tones of the trees and snow really enhance the feeling of isolation! I think that if you decided to put sound in this game later on, it would make it even more immersive and frightening.
I agree with them that sound would be so cool here and add even more tension. I also love the contrast you have with the warm tones in the character and the cool, dull tones everywhere else. It really makes the character stand out. I'm also gonna borrow from what they said as a comment on my game and say maybe add a "play again" option at the end of each ending so that going back and trying to get the different endings is easier.
This is super intense and really sets a mood throughout each path! Going forward, I think it will be interesting to see where you take the illustrations and possibly sound effects (if you decide to use them). Each path felt different and genuine and I can't wait to see where this goes! Keep up the good work!
Wow this is intense. I don't know if this is the setting you want to keep using in a more finished version, but I think it is a good illustration of what street harassment feels like (If I can presume that much). Having us answer honestly or not, assume to worst on the antagonist or not... those are bold moral stakes. Good job
Some paths don't have an ending yet!